Assignment 1 – Katie Li

My first 30 quote variations:

Please Criticize my work. Thank You!

3 thoughts on “Assignment 1 – Katie Li”

  1. I love these designs! I especially love that last box on your second page, the concept is so good! Overall, my only critique would be I think some of the words come too close to the box walls sometimes. It gives a tension or edge to some of the designs, which is kind of a contradiction to the overall ‘go with the flow’ feel of the quote itself. Specific ones I believe do it the most are on the second page, row two, columns three and four. It’s a very simple change, but besides that, I think you handled these first two pages really well! I’m excited to see the rest! 💕

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  2. Really good so far, I like how in your 2nd page 2nd on the bottom row that you enhanced the word good to add emphasis. On the 2nd page, the last box you might want to play with the alignment on the phrase “just try to be good”. I’m looking forward to seeing the other pages.

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