Looking good Sam. A couple things to note: be careful when setting type close to the edge because it can cause tension and have a negative effect on readability; when working with type this short, hyphens can be extremely distracting and are better suited for large bodies of text; double-check that your letter spacing is set to optical. The kerning looks messy in some spots, so adjusting the letter spacing to optical or manually adjusting will kep with readability and refine the overall quote. If you want some practice, check out that Kerning Game in the resources dropdown.
COMD250 Fall 2019 
nice job changing the lead, and tracking. However I would suggest experimenting a bit more with font size
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You did really well with experimentation. I can see your development becoming stronger as you go. Keep up the good work!
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Looking good Sam. A couple things to note: be careful when setting type close to the edge because it can cause tension and have a negative effect on readability; when working with type this short, hyphens can be extremely distracting and are better suited for large bodies of text; double-check that your letter spacing is set to optical. The kerning looks messy in some spots, so adjusting the letter spacing to optical or manually adjusting will kep with readability and refine the overall quote. If you want some practice, check out that Kerning Game in the resources dropdown.
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