Hi Katie, great job so far. I’d like to see you experiment more from row to row. For example: first page 2nd row – experiment more with some words being capitalized, and other words lowercase. See how experimenting with the case causes the quote to be read differently. Same with the 3rd row, try to experiment even more with the leading. Maybe some rows of type could be closer than others. I look forward to seeing your more experimental pages during critique on Monday.
COMD250 Fall 2019 
Hi Katie, great job so far. I’d like to see you experiment more from row to row. For example: first page 2nd row – experiment more with some words being capitalized, and other words lowercase. See how experimenting with the case causes the quote to be read differently. Same with the 3rd row, try to experiment even more with the leading. Maybe some rows of type could be closer than others. I look forward to seeing your more experimental pages during critique on Monday.
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