Hey again, guys! With the feedback I received, I tried my best to make some serious changes to my 3rd and 4th pages! I kept only a couple of the old designs and experimented with them some more in a second panel to see if I could find a way to make them more legible as well as less illustrative. (I also wanted to show my thinking process.) Let me know what you think for some final suggestions! Anything is helpful!
COMD250 Fall 2019 
Molly! Your work is amazing – and I really like your creativity in showing the quote! A lot of the boxes show images/designs that have to do with thinking or visibility, which connects really well with the quote itself. The box in the second row, fourth from the right (in the second panel) is probably one of my favorites. Great job
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Thank you so much~!! I’m so glad you like them~! 💕 This assignment has been a serious challenge for me and I’ve put a lot of hours into it, so I’m really happy to know you like it~!
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I love this so much! You utilized the space so well. The design is well establish in each art board and the words read well.
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Thank you so much~!! It was definitely a challenge to experiment while also keeping them legible~ 😂
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Hi Molly! Overall it’s great seeing how you’re balancing experimentation with communicating the meaning of the quote. I mentioned this in my email reply to you but thought I’d paste it here as well. Try creating a few iterations that focus on only type, no other shapes or design elements. I see a few great options. I’d suggest looking up Saul Bass’s work too. You’d find it very inspiring, especially his simple type treatments.
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