I tried to brainstorm a bit in my sketchbook after thinking about some of the feedback I got from class. I started to find a shape/composition/flow I really liked, so I did just a few tests with it!
My least favorite is the middle one, but I liked how the other two turned out! If anyone has any feedback as to how I should move forward, that would be greatly appreciated!






I like the third one the best, good combo of in the box text and out of the box text!
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I quite like the first one of these designs. I feel like it keeps the text in focus and easy to find and read as my eyes are immediately drawn to the rectangle near the name at first glance. Other than that I think you used the shapes sparingly enough that it becomes just a feature to the poster rather than the entire composition itself which I initially had a problem with… Awesome 🙂
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