Here’s my last renditions of the poster. Which one do you like the most? are there any small changes you’d make?
Final Draft Opinions?
Here’s my last renditions of the poster. Which one do you like the most? are there any small changes you’d make?
COMD250 Fall 2019 
All of these look really cool! You really experimented more with these ones.
The main critique I have is that the ‘Paul Sahre’ in the first one is hard to read. When I try to read it feels like its moving or vibrating almost making it a bit hard to read. You are successful in the other two but the colors of the first one don’t really work the same way to me. Additionally, the color scheme of the first one is very nice and pleasing to look at but the yellow you used in the shapes makes some of the words get hidden or blend in with it. I hope that helps.
Other than that awesome work and interesting concepts!
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And I like the 2nd one the most as it stands out the most to me.
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I think all three of these are really strong with composition and color, but I agree with Dev, they’re all really hard to read. it looks like you just put the text over top instead of incorporating it into the background, so maybe try confining some text into the boxes you have in the background (for all of them). haha my favorite is also the second one, because of the colors, but I think the first one would probably my fave if the boxes weren’t so busy. Great job overall tho!!
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