Heya!
I revisited my drafts based on some suggestions I got during class and switched everything up a bit. Please do let me know if you have any critiques and any suggestions to improve them. I don’t have any specific one in mind as a final yet so do tell me if any of these stick out more to you than the others.
Thank you!
COMD250 Fall 2019 
That first one has come a long way! I think the background works much better than your original first drafts. Maybe experiment with your type layout a little more? Maybe make the type on the bottom two columns, the left being the first three lines and the right being the school/address. Maybe use the lighter yellow on the bio information. It would be easier to read, and I imagine that it prints darker. The more contrast, the better.
The second design is really interesting, though maybe try removing the letters surrounding his name. I know where you got your inspiration from but in this context, it doesn’t work well with the rest of the design. I think it would look more refined with just his name larger and slightly overlapping more shapes.
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Thank you! I’ll definitely refine these some more based on your suggestions. 🙂
In the 2nd one does the bio paragraph look ok? I was concerned that it was a little weird to read in the way it’s laid out.
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I like the first two a lot, but I agree the second one doesn’t need the letters around it, maybe stick to an outline! 🙂 also all the corners of the second one have shapes in them to define them except for the bottom left and I think putting another shape there would be good!
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