Any suggestions, critiques, or even advice on this project will be extremely helpful. I find myself struggling with this project like the first assignment, so anything, and I mean anything is helpful in the long run!
I jumped around in this iteration process. I went back to my very first iteration and tweaked it a bit half way through, trying out small things just to see how it’d affect the overall composition. The last three were a process of me finding an idea I liked. Each sentence is meant to be interlocking with the other, eluding to how the paragraph describes the relationship of the human ear and human voice. “Forming one complete organ”. If anyone has any suggestions on how I might be able to build on some of these iterations, please let me know. Even simply saying which you like most is helpful! Thank you!
COMD250 Fall 2019 
I really dig the third row of paragraphs. The split in the two blocks in the first two iterations is effective, and there’s something really cool about the tension that’s created at the point where the two blocks almost touch in the first one. I also like he emphasis on “one” in the last iteration. There’s something really strong about how it draws the eye to the center, and you chose a good word to do that with. Nice job!
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