Any critiques and suggestions?
Paragraph Iterations
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My name is Hoiki Tsui, I always go by Kate. I come from Guangdong near HK. My major is illustration and I would like to set up my own studio for doing book cover design or tattooing. I love painting and playing volleyball. I was a captain in my high school volleyball team. I have been doing art since I was in high school. I used to paint and draw on paper a lot, but after I came to Pratt, I started using IPad for art design. View all posts by katehoikitsui




I really enjoy the look of your second iteration! Though the first is very fun, I find it hard to read the actual paragraph itself.
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