This is what I have so far. Any critique would be much appreciated.
Sam
This is what I have so far. Any critique would be much appreciated.
Sam
This is what I have so far. Any critique would be much appreciated.
Sam
This is what I have so far. Any critique would be much appreciated.
Sam
COMD250 Fall 2019 
Some things you should consider:
– Context is important, so maybe add a date next to the day.
– Your typography could use more refinement. If you try using all-caps for the days but make it bolder it would clean up the type without sacrificing hierarchy.
– Make sure the color system you use is consistent. I think the red type for Netflix works well and will help the reader navigate easier. Should this be implemented into the lines also?
– Be sure to clean up your linework, specifically where paths intersect and branch off.
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I think this is a very fun set up! However, I think you are in definite need of some context, as Christina said. At first, I didn’t know what info I was supposed to be receiving from this.
It might be interesting to see a different version of this with the actual platform logos used rather than just the company name typed out! It might be too late for that, but it’s an idea!
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