Here are the first (very rough) sketches!
And here are the colored compositions, including the text! Any feedback on which you all think is best and I should play around with more would be so much appreciated!
Hey again, guys! With the feedback I received, I tried my best to make some serious changes to my 3rd and 4th pages! I kept only a couple of the old designs and experimented with them some more in a second panel to see if I could find a way to make them more legible as well as less illustrative. (I also wanted to show my thinking process.) Let me know what you think for some final suggestions! Anything is helpful!
I tried to pour as much work into this as I could so I could upload a draft and revise as much as possible. Typography is something I’ve always struggled with, so anything anyone can give me is great! I’m more than willing to revise any design and try out whatever’s suggested! Thank you guys!
COMD250 Fall 2019 
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