
Jacob Garry





Any critiques and suggestions?
Any suggestions, critiques, or even advice on this project will be extremely helpful. I find myself struggling with this project like the first assignment, so anything, and I mean anything is helpful in the long run!














I jumped around in this iteration process. I went back to my very first iteration and tweaked it a bit half way through, trying out small things just to see how it’d affect the overall composition. The last three were a process of me finding an idea I liked. Each sentence is meant to be interlocking with the other, eluding to how the paragraph describes the relationship of the human ear and human voice. “Forming one complete organ”. If anyone has any suggestions on how I might be able to build on some of these iterations, please let me know. Even simply saying which you like most is helpful! Thank you!
Hey there everyone,
Here is what’s due for next week!
Enjoy the rest of your week!



Would love some final feedback on revised poster. Thank you!
Review this poster by Jim Godfrey. We’ll be talking about it tomorrow. If you want to take a closer look or download it, just click here!

Heya!
I revisited my drafts based on some suggestions I got during class and switched everything up a bit. Please do let me know if you have any critiques and any suggestions to improve them. I don’t have any specific one in mind as a final yet so do tell me if any of these stick out more to you than the others.



Thank you!
Here’s my last renditions of the poster. Which one do you like the most? are there any small changes you’d make?



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