Assignment 1 Redo

Hey again, guys! With the feedback I received, I tried my best to make some serious changes to my 3rd and 4th pages! I kept only a couple of the old designs and experimented with them some more in a second panel to see if I could find a way to make them more legible as well as less illustrative. (I also wanted to show my thinking process.) Let me know what you think for some final suggestions! Anything is helpful!