Those look awesome, Hannah! I really love those last two you did, they’re really experimentally~!
I honestly don’t have a critique, but I do have a suggestion~! On page two, the second and third designs of the first column feel like they need just a bit more balance. I’d love to see you try to play with caps or small caps on those designs~! You don’t have to but I think it’d look interesting and help to balance the designs out~! 💕
I don’t believe this was a quote from the provided list so next time be sure to follow directions and ask for permission! On page 1 row 2, I’d like to see you experiment more with uppercase and lowercase, using them together to bring more or less focus to some words, and even more experimentation with tracking. The first iterations on your second page, middle and bottom row read pretty well and the words emphasize feel appropriate. The line breaks and leading could use some refinement but I look forward to seeing your more experimental designs on Monday!
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Those look awesome, Hannah! I really love those last two you did, they’re really experimentally~!
I honestly don’t have a critique, but I do have a suggestion~! On page two, the second and third designs of the first column feel like they need just a bit more balance. I’d love to see you try to play with caps or small caps on those designs~! You don’t have to but I think it’d look interesting and help to balance the designs out~! 💕
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I don’t believe this was a quote from the provided list so next time be sure to follow directions and ask for permission! On page 1 row 2, I’d like to see you experiment more with uppercase and lowercase, using them together to bring more or less focus to some words, and even more experimentation with tracking. The first iterations on your second page, middle and bottom row read pretty well and the words emphasize feel appropriate. The line breaks and leading could use some refinement but I look forward to seeing your more experimental designs on Monday!
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ah sorry i forgot!! I’ll definitely take your suggestions though and try and push more!
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